Do Writers Really Work Better Drunk? Should you 'Write Drunk, Edit Sober'?
Hemingway was against it...
The aphorism ‘Write drunk, edit sober’ is often incorrectly attributed to Ernest Hemingway. After all, he was famous for writing and drinking, so it makes sense. The problem is, it’s not true. Hemingway was consistent - he wrote very early in the morning and drank in the evening.
So, if anything, he both wrote and edited hungover, which is a lot less appealing.
However, the myth of the heavy drinking writer is partially true, but their talent is arguably despite the booze, not a result of it.
The origins of the saying
The handy website Quote Investigator lived up to its name and looked into the origins of this. There are actually two slightly different versions of the saying:
Write drunk, edit sober.
Write drunk, revise sober.
According to Quote Investigator, there has never been a record of Hemingway saying either of these phrases. The first appearance of the quote seems to be in a novel called Reuben, Reuben by an author and humorist called Peter De Vries. In the book, there’s a character based on the Welsh poet Dylan Thomas, who famously loved to drink and knock out the odd poem. The character says:
“Sometimes I write drunk and revise sober,” he had said, “and sometimes I write sober and revise drunk. But you have to have both elements in creation — the Apollonian and the Dionysian, or spontaneity and restraint, emotion and discipline.”
In More Fool Me: A Memoir,
attributes it to someone else and writes:“I can write drunk, but must revise sober,” F. Scott Fitzgerald is said to have told his editor, Maxwell Perkins.
No matter the origin, the concept is well-known, with numerous famous authors seemingly reinforcing the idea with their penchant for a tipple while banging out works of literary genius. So, is there something to it after all?
Is it common for authors to ‘Write drunk, edit sober’?
The short answer is no, not really. However, there have been some famous exceptions, and it is because of them that this idea has remained popular.
Not only did Hemingway not drink while working, he was actually against it. Three years before his death, Hemingway gave an interview with Reader’s Digest where he said:
“Have you ever heard of anyone who drank while he worked?
You’re thinking of Faulkner. He does sometimes — and I can tell right in the middle of a page when he’s had his first one.”
(Original quote can be found here.)
So Hemingway didn’t work under the influence, but William Faulkner famously did. There is a well-known story that in 1937, Faulkner was with his French Translator, a man called Maurice Edgar Coindreau. The translator asked Faulkner what he meant by a particular sentence, and the legendary author looked at it for a while and burst out laughing. He then said to Coindreau:
“I have absolutely no idea of what I meant. You see, I usually write at night. I always keep my whiskey within reach; so many ideas that I can’t remember in the morning pop into my head.”
Ian Fleming was another high-functioning writer and drinker who, at one stage, was drinking a bottle of gin a day. His doctor even advised him to switch to bourbon as that might be healthier. Despite his impressive intake, at no point did the quality of his literary output relate to the quantity of his alcoholic input.
So some famous drinkers would probably be classed as ‘high-functioning alcoholics’, but they certainly weren’t the norm. Being able to write amazing prose while drunk doesn’t equate to the booze sparking creativity.
And alcohol abuse is often the result of other, darker issues.
There is a lot of tragedy surrounding these heavy-drinking writers
As mentioned before, Dylan Thomas was fond of a drink or several. Too much so, in fact, as it was one of the main things that killed him when he was just 39. The talented F. Scott Fitzgerald was an alcoholic who likewise died young - he was just 44. Both were incredible talents who were eventually brought low by drink.
Famous for his pioneering of gonzo journalism and general love of excess, Hunter S Thompson was fond of imbibing all sorts of substances. Sadly, like Hemingway before him, he tragically committed suicide.
Charles Bukowski lived into his seventies. In interviews, he explained that he drank because he was cripplingly shy and could write better when he was drunk. But he then discovered, after an illness that meant he couldn’t drink for a few months, that he could write just fine sober. (Although it didn’t stop him from drinking when he got better.)
Stephen King likewise went through a period where he drank heavily and took part in substance abuse to the point where he actually forgot writing books like Cujo. After hitting rock bottom and then sobering up, he discovered that his writing was still just as good as before. He continues to do pretty well to this day.
Writing is not enhanced by alcohol
It seems pretty clear that many works of literary genius came about despite booze rather than because of it. Sadly, in many cases, it was a talented writer fighting their internal demons. Some got through the battle, but some sadly didn’t.
Even though a couple of authors seemed to be able to function relatively well while drinking, there is very little evidence that it enhanced their writing and quite a lot of evidence that they wrote just as well when sober.
Journalism, my career of around 30 years, has been tarred with much the same brush. It is perceived (occasionally correctly) as a job populated by hard drinkers.
From personal experience and that of numerous colleagues, writing is a skill that can be learned and alcohol, no matter how delicious and fun, does not enhance that ability. I have written drunk and sober, and - happily - I write better sober.
Like any other job, really.
I wrote a version of this article on Medium. There are other intriguing tales there, too, if you’re interested.
I wrote a short piece entitled "2 Pints In", in which I described the creative neurons pinging away in the pub. I have lost it of course. Sometimes something hits when I am having a drink, and at that point I am glad of my notebook: it'll be a phrase or a twist, an expression, a possibility. I could never actually write proper sentences at those times. If it still looks good tomorrow it might get in.
Very enlightening read, and I've so often misattributed that saying to Hemingway. Now that I know the truth, I'll have to add that disclaimer.
I wouldn't say I follow the 'write drunk' thing, but with my first book, I might have had a beer or two to get the so-called creative juices flowing and when all was said and done, it turned out that those particular chapters didn't need much revising at all!
Definitely no more than two beers, though, that's for sure. After that...it gets messy.
If you haven't read it, The Trip to Echo Spring by Olivia Laing is a great book on this topic.